Rachel Kherzovli

The journal · Service definition and commercial strategy

The easiest unit to price may leave the real design work outside the offer

Word count made a multilingual service look repeatable. The strategic question was whether that unit described the work the receiving client actually needed the practice to perform.

What the word count made convenient

I liked the multilingual offer because it could be explained in a short conversation. Count the words, identify the languages and describe the translation work. That gave sales colleagues a practical starting point and made the service appear ready for expansion. It also created a risk that I did not examine closely enough. The client might be asking people to navigate a place, while our commercial unit described only the preparation of words. The two activities overlap, but they are not identical. A clear price can still be attached to an incomplete account of the service.

Mariam reviewed twelve proposed briefs. Five fitted the bounded translation scope; seven required journey-design work. The finding did not show that translation was unimportant or that every multilingual assignment needed a large redesign. It showed that the proposed unit was being asked to represent different responsibilities. A label could be translated accurately while the visitor still struggled to recognise the destination or understand the next decision point. The missing work did not vanish because it was absent from the price model. It remained part of what some clients expected the practice to solve.

The commercial team's concern was legitimate. A differentiated offer takes longer to explain and can make a practice look less decisive. Clients may want to understand the fee before spending time on another assessment. A strategy that responds to every uncertainty with an elaborate discovery process can become difficult to buy. I did not want to replace a useful bounded service with unnecessary complexity. The correction was to identify where the simple offer was appropriate and where it was being used to imply something broader, then make that distinction understandable before the agreement.

We spent ₹18 lakh revising the proposition and supporting process. That was an expense incurred because the earlier approval had not adequately described the work. It did not establish a subsequent improvement in navigation, a higher margin or a universal conversion rate. The twelve briefs were selected examples, not a market census. What changed was the service account. Translation could remain a defined offer, while journey-design requirements received another scope and the relevant qualified owners. I had to accept a less uniform growth story in order to preserve the actual responsibility.

The work that returned through the brief

A pricing unit does more than calculate a fee. It tells colleagues and clients what the enterprise believes the work consists of. If the unit is a word, a sign or a page, the organisation can begin to optimise around producing those objects. That may be entirely appropriate for a bounded production service. It becomes problematic when the proposition promises a result that depends on relationships between the objects, the place and the people using it. The strategy should state which business it is offering instead of allowing the production unit to define that business by accident.

This distinction is visible in the questions that arrive after an initial proposal. A client asks whether two destinations with similar names will be confused, whether a changed entrance alters the sequence or whether the next sign is encountered at the point a visitor needs it. Those are not necessarily requests for more words. They can be requests for judgement about a journey. The practice needs qualified people to examine them and appropriate permissions to understand the actual setting. The strategist's responsibility is to ensure that the commercial model has not promised that judgement while funding only a narrower production task.

There is a temptation to call every such question scope expansion. Sometimes a client does ask for something genuinely additional. Sometimes the question reveals what the original promise already led the client to expect. The distinction requires attention to the actual agreement and the conversations that formed it. A revised brochure cannot settle every existing customer's rights. I want commercial and legal colleagues to retain that responsibility, while strategy improves how the next offer is defined. Better boundaries should reduce misunderstanding rather than become a convenient vocabulary for refusing legitimate service.

The same issue can arise in a bid whose headline value includes fabrication and installation. A large invoice may describe a broader delivery business, with its own working capital and obligations, rather than a larger amount of advisory work. In our comparison, ₹3.6 crore included ₹2.7 crore of pass-through activity and ₹90 lakh design scope. The ₹1.1 crore advisory alternative was a different arrangement. Those figures did not establish comparative profit. They made it necessary to ask what capability and responsibility the company wanted to build through the contract.

Repeatability with an honest boundary

I still want services that can be bought and delivered with reasonable consistency. A practice cannot treat every engagement as if nothing has been learned before. The question is which parts are sufficiently understood to repeat and which require contextual judgement. A clear bounded translation service can be valuable. So can a defined content-update arrangement. Their usefulness does not depend on presenting them as answers to every navigation problem. In fact, their boundaries can make them easier to trust because the client can see when another kind of work is needed.

The boundary must be supported operationally. Sales colleagues need a practical way to recognise the distinction without becoming specialist designers. Practitioners need time to assess the relevant question, and clients need to know who can approve the next scope. If the boundary exists only in internal terminology, the misunderstanding will return through delivery. The executive account should therefore include the cost of making the offer intelligible and the responsibilities that keep it so. That is part of the service model, not merely a communication exercise performed after strategy has been decided.

An objection worth taking seriously is that precise scoping can make growth slower. It can. The immediate market may be smaller than the one suggested by a broad promise, and a differentiated offer can require more discussion before agreement. The relevant comparison is with the cost of selling an undertaking the company has not prepared to deliver. I would rather understand that trade-off explicitly than report a wider addressable market whose economics rely on leaving essential work out of the account. A narrower proposition can be a stronger basis for learning and later expansion.

The multilingual correction changed the question I ask when a new commercial unit looks elegant. Does it describe the work we intend to sell, or only the part easiest to count? The answer may justify the unit, refine the offer or require another service altogether. What matters is that the receiving client's expectation and the practice's operating responsibility can be reconciled. Repeatability is valuable when it preserves the judgement the service needs. When it removes that judgement from the price without removing it from the promise, the apparent simplicity is a debt that delivery will eventually have to pay.