I lead marketing for workplace relocation services, making the move we can deliver clear enough for clients to plan the work that remains theirs.
The sentence I withdrew was attractive because it made a complex workplace change sound complete. We could coordinate a weekend relocation, so the campaign presented Monday business readiness as the natural result. The distinction only became unavoidable when we examined the customer’s unfinished technology work alongside our completed physical move. I had allowed the service description to cross a responsibility boundary without the evidence required to support it.
A service promise should make the next responsibility easier to see. If the customer can only discover its boundary after buying, the marketing has left part of the job unfinished.